Run Rufus, run!

Fran and her dad were fishing at the river. Rufus, their dog was with them. They always had to keep an eye on him. Suddenly, Rufus pricked up his ears, then he jumped up and dived straight into the river. “Come back Rufus!”, shouted Fran. However, Rufus was swimming quickly down the river. Fran shouted at Rufus again and again but he just kept on swimming.

All of a sudden, Rufus disappeared. “Rufus, where are you?”, she yelled. Fran felt as scared as a ghost because she thought that Rufus had been taken away from her. Then, they heard Rufus barking. Fran saw Rufus playing with another dog. “Dad, Rufus is playing!”, shouted Fran.

WALT use critical thinking skills using De Bono's thinking hat.
I know this when I write an alternative ending using De Bono's green thinking hat for Rufus.