Woohoo! I reached the top!

On Monday, my family, cousins, aunt, uncle and I decided to go to Climbzone because my cousins, sister and I loves to climb. First, we went to a restaurant before we went to Climbzone so that we could have fuel up and have energy for our climb.

               Once we were at the restaurant, we picked some Chinese food. We had steamed rice, prawn, pork buns, chicken feet, beef, squid, dumplings, spring roll and more! We had a lot of food and we ate a lot. "Their food makes my tummy full because it is so delicious!", I said. 

"Same as me", my cousin replied. After our tummies were full, we went to Climbzone.

               My cousins, sister and I went to a man so he can put our harness on for us so we would be safe climbing the wall. When we were ready with our harness the man taught us how to climb and told us the rules about rock climbing. After we were told the rules and how to climb, we were allowed to start rock climbing.                We climbed up as high as we could. "Yay! I did it!", I shouted. One of my cousins and my sister tried to climb up to the top as quick as a mice but it was too difficult for them. "This is too hard Shannon! What is your technique?", my cousin asked. "Use your muscles to pull yourself up!", I said. My cousins, sister and I had a race. We tried to climb as rapid as a cheetah up to the top. Yay! It was a tie!

               That was a fun time at Climbzone. I love to climb and have races with other people. When my cousins come again, I hope we can go again so I can beat my time going to the top.

WALT understand and use descriptive language.

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Have you been rock climbing before?

It was a cold drizzly morning. Yay! Another birthday party to go to! I got up and got dressed. After that, I put on my shoes.
               Then my mum and my sister dropped me off at Climbzone. Once I arrived there, I looked for Cheska but I couldn't find her. I felt confused because I was searching for her everywhere. Before I climbed, I had to wear a harness for safety in case I fell.
               Yay! I am now ready to climb! I thought it would be hard but it was easy. After that, I went to Adventure Land. When I was there, Cheska saw me and came up to me. "There you are," I said. Then I saw Kayla, Gabby and Cheska's other friends.
               The first activity that we did was rock climbing. We raced each other up the walls. I raced with Kayla and Cheska. We tried to go as fast as we could to get to the top. Kayla won the first race. Gabby and I had a race as well. "Three, two, one, go!" I shouted. It was funny because we were having trouble climbing. To me it was the hardest rock climbing up the wall. We had to cling into small blocks and big blocks. "Gabby, when we go down, let's go slowly and fly gracefully like an angel!", I said.
"Okay", she replied. We looked like birds. I was laughing because while we were going down slowly, we kept on bumping into the walls.
               Then we played a few games. First we played Hide and seek tag. We played it a few times. "Let's play Infection!", said Cheska's friends. We ran away as fast as we could and hid from the tagger. It was fun because I loved hiding.
               We got hungry so we had some food. I had a sausage sizzle, fried chicken and some rice. "Yum!", said all of us.
               It was an incredible time at Climbzone. I had fun climbing the walls and playing games. Maybe I'll have my birthday there next time.

WALT understand and use descriptive language. 
I know this when I use appropriate adjectives, verbs and adverbs in my recount.